Thanks to Swiss for the ingenius tree exercise, which resulted in the following Tree Poem:
Imposter Garden Tree - removing this for the time being - leave me a comment if you want to see it again
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Sunday, December 13, 2009
Tree Poem
POEMS IN SHOPS HITS GALWAY !!!! - Check Man About Forty's blog for more details... One of the most dastardly adventures in the odyssey yet....
Thanks to Swiss for the ingenius tree exercise, which resulted in the following Tree Poem:
Thanks to Swiss for the ingenius tree exercise, which resulted in the following Tree Poem:
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I like the distant cousins very much.
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Yeh, distant cousins is very funny, but also poignant in some strange way.A great poem.One of your best methinks.
Thanks Rachel and TFE - trees do make good poetic subjects don't they?
Cheers
Like this, and I love the way you've made the tree almost conscious - all the active verbs, the familial (or not) relationships and the severed limbs. Last stanza a knock-out.
Thanks a mill Titus!
MAF's wife and mother to very young emerging poet (very young as mother still considers herself as young) says congrats on the great idea and even higher congrats on carrying it off.
MAF's household has gone mad blogging with littleones greeting me at the door as I return from work saying "Mom come here and you see the comments MAF's daughter is getting on her poem / his blog" Poem in shop month is certainly making memories in our wee house in Galway....
Thanks MAF's wife, hope you're very proud of your emerging poetess!!
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