Sunday, November 8, 2009

Monday poem

Keeping the poetry Bus-ness goin here's this week's effort...

9 comments:

Dominic Rivron said...

Superb. I should add, though, that I like my dentist and sometimes almost fall asleep while reclining in the chair.

Totalfeckineejit said...

You seen' Marathon man' with Dustin (The Turkey) Hoffman?
Good poem.I is liking them radio podcastros too! Go maith!

Niamh B said...

Thanks Dominic. I once went out with a dentist, they're not all bad.
TFE - I don't actually recall it, but that doesn't mean I haven't seen it. go raibh maith agat re the radio - means a lot to hear that you're enjoying em.

Rachel Fox said...

If Titus is queen of the first line than maybe you are queen of the clever last line twist!

x

the watercats said...

*shudders as you just reminded me I'm due another filling.... why does anyone become a dentist? (except for the financial gain).. maybe just answered my own question... nicely written poemtude :-)

LilyS said...

I dont like dentists and neither does my bank account! I do however like your poem :)

Niamh B said...

Thanks Rachel, would settle for being princess/ queen of anything at all, so that's great.
Yes Watercats - think you've hit the nail on the head.
Thanks a mill Lily - I stay as clear as I can of them, which prob isn't all that wise, but it's an option.

NanU said...

oh dear me; you need a new dentist. All the ones I've had here in France have lots of fancy new trauma-reducing equipment and no hesitation in giving their patients the calmants they need!

Long Live the Poetry Bus!

Niamh B said...

yes, they were brutal 20 years ago when last I visited one - yay the bus