tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post4081224421633006324..comments2024-01-31T13:17:39.976-08:00Comments on Various: an extra long haikuNiamh Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-3810283593791108292010-03-07T02:45:14.630-08:002010-03-07T02:45:14.630-08:00Watercats - you did inspire them, so take a bow fo...Watercats - you did inspire them, so take a bow for the idea!<br /><br />Ah Dominic - it's all about the name of the form... if you do find out again - let me know! (I've written a triple tanka for the train this week, so if there's any fancy name I can put on it - I'll take it!)Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-54637855857848829482010-03-06T16:18:58.225-08:002010-03-06T16:18:58.225-08:00Tankas are such fun.
(I wish I could think of 4 m...Tankas are such fun.<br /><br />(I wish I could think of 4 more lines. I sat here scratching my head for five minutes, but no, I can't).<br /><br />There is an "extra long tanka" form -I don't know it's name- that goes 57(as many times as you like) ending 577. I've experimented with it but didn't feel comfortable with it myself, somehow.Dominic Rivronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02618013365521035400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-35981882675779291172010-03-05T08:05:31.506-08:002010-03-05T08:05:31.506-08:00HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAA!!!!..... better than...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAA!!!!..... better than anything I came up with, lol! brilliant!Batteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-19923787519846302582010-03-04T23:49:05.523-08:002010-03-04T23:49:05.523-08:00Don't mention training
Dog still thinks she ru...Don't mention training<br />Dog still thinks she rules the house<br />Chewing my foot nowNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-25161488498545719512010-03-04T14:16:13.780-08:002010-03-04T14:16:13.780-08:00husband on a leash
sounds a little bit kinky
or ju...husband on a leash<br />sounds a little bit kinky<br />or just good training.Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-40714800239878050482010-03-04T13:24:29.979-08:002010-03-04T13:24:29.979-08:00Thanks Titus... You're so right - can't be...Thanks Titus... You're so right - can't beat that hairy rugged handsome look.Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-83640058327626520732010-03-04T13:13:47.949-08:002010-03-04T13:13:47.949-08:00Can I just say I loved the extended haiku and have...Can I just say I loved the extended haiku and have never sat through a whole Star Wars film yet?<br /><br />However, I do fancy Chewbacca more that any of them, so keep that husband on a leash, D'Oub.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-88511381702296722122010-03-04T13:03:17.817-08:002010-03-04T13:03:17.817-08:00writing runs up screen
away from viewer, loud musi...writing runs up screen<br />away from viewer, loud music<br />covers poor effects<br /><br />better effects then<br />in the later films - sadly<br />plot not much good sinceNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-73217713314804491972010-03-04T12:41:32.312-08:002010-03-04T12:41:32.312-08:00Luke kisses Leia
unintentional incest
Plan the sto...Luke kisses Leia<br />unintentional incest<br />Plan the story George?<br /><br />Yoda, small and green.<br />yet is surprisingly strong.<br />A bit like a Sprout.<br /><br />Chewbacca is hairy,<br />And is hard to understand.<br />Sounds like my husband.Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-77930583388914170012010-03-04T12:06:05.486-08:002010-03-04T12:06:05.486-08:00Bobba Fett took Han
All frozen to see Jabba,
Luke ...Bobba Fett took Han<br />All frozen to see Jabba,<br />Luke has to fight a monsterMatt Boltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17921596600713853126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-45796493816742777082010-03-04T12:00:17.632-08:002010-03-04T12:00:17.632-08:00Thanks Poetikat - I've visited the Kigo blog n...Thanks Poetikat - I've visited the Kigo blog now, thanks for pointing it out - well worth the visit too! (I promise I won't tell TFE!)<br />Thanks Watercats.. and look what you've started!!<br />Oub/ Matt - I'm shocked Yoda didn't get a mention there somewhere - sure didn't he invent Haikus?<br /><br />Follow the force Luke<br />Likes you does Princess Leia<br />Fine plaits she has, yesNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-21622078604372362152010-03-04T11:20:27.444-08:002010-03-04T11:20:27.444-08:00LOL! Matt, I was working on a Han shot first, feck...LOL! Matt, I was working on a Han shot first, feck off George one as well! Great minds dude, great minds!Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-65937345295114288432010-03-04T10:38:10.576-08:002010-03-04T10:38:10.576-08:00Oub that is awesome! The form is called a Waka but...Oub that is awesome! The form is called a Waka but as far as I can tell is an off shoot of the haiku form. Though as Watercats says, they can be much of a muchness. <br /><br />Hans shot gredo first<br />but Lucas has to change it, <br />the prequels were crap.Matt Boltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17921596600713853126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-71485627961668644192010-03-04T10:03:32.224-08:002010-03-04T10:03:32.224-08:00Far distance and time
plucky rebels fight despot
L...Far distance and time<br />plucky rebels fight despot<br />Luke dislikes his dad.Domestic Oubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298706907126418711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-54013323618960107232010-03-04T09:12:18.346-08:002010-03-04T09:12:18.346-08:00I found the haiku thingies in class a bit of a muc...I found the haiku thingies in class a bit of a muchness.. I like the idea of them though, and this one of course, is the best long haiku ever written.. ever! :-)<br />I kept trying to make ones up about star wars.. just to see if I could ... it is possible :-DBatteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-81121259808180519432010-03-04T08:21:29.532-08:002010-03-04T08:21:29.532-08:00(TFE hates haiku, so I haven't mentioned it to...(TFE hates haiku, so I haven't mentioned it to the Poetry Bus crowd.)Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6862054200092259163.post-88159110482630729182010-03-04T08:20:51.877-08:002010-03-04T08:20:51.877-08:00That was just great! I really enjoyed the stretche...That was just great! I really enjoyed the stretched-out version. (Must try it sometime.) Have you visited my Kigo of the Kat blog?<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.com